Hi
No offence, but I think you need to work on your dialogue some, it's hard to tell what's going on here.
Also you might want to do an introductory episode to give a setting, this seems to begin in the middle.
seems promising though good luck.

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Hey, welcome to DA! That's an interesting web comic you've got going on there. Overall, they've got a good sense of humour about them. But it might be tough if you're expecting people to comment on each and every piece. What I'd suggest you do is use each piece as if it were an individual panel in an actual comic and then submit a page with several panels in it or better still wait and submit the entire comic all at once. That way, it might capture more people's attention and maintain their interest in your works. Good luck!